This is my second favorite part of There She Is!!
Normally I don't gave a flash movie a 10, but this animation has the merit of my 10.
My 10 is almost an "achievement", because it means the perfection or very near of it. This animation reached that level.
The first thing I liked is the background. I liked the parallax effect at the beginning. Then I liked how you showed Nabi's normal daily life. It's awesome to see that your story has kept for 3 years. Not many people can do it better.
I liked the song, but now you've synchronized the song with the animation, thing that I loved.
And... what to say? Ah! I've noticed the runtime marker at the preloader. I liked it, because now I won't be worried about how long it will be.
I liked again how you've make the music to be integrated with the story. But I personally don't like how you've expand it. That Bunny's friends... where they come from? But all the other things of the story are perfect.
I liked how you've improved your 3D style, and also that final sentence.
I don't speak Korean, but personally I liked the song.
I was thinking that I would gave you an 8, but then I see how you've worked on it.
Good for being a first part
They're some animation things that I don't liked too much, like when Cat and Bunny (surely, I don't remember how they're their names ^^;) are dashing. Their legs are pixelated. And that shocked me.
But 3D animation is something that I don't usually see. And I love this 3D style.
And music was perfectly integrated with the story, which it's very expressed, but not perfectly, because there's a hole on the story. If you didn't make it a series, this movie will had a sad ending.
Due to the final thing I've reviewed, I can't give you a 10. I'm sorry.
Well, let's get started. It's very clear what kinda story you wanted to express. So I'll gave it a 10/10.
The music... Well, I didn't like it too much. You could put a track which it was more integrated with the story. So I'll gave it a 6/10.
The art. Personally, I liked the colors and backgrounds, but not how you've used the gradients on some parts. It's easily recognizable to see them. You should practice with them more. And Luigi and Mario looked like cooked clay (that polymerized clay when it's cooked on the oven) or plastic, one thing that I like. I give this section a 8/10.
Animation... Well, I personally don't like it too much. You... well... tired to express how Luigi dance. But I don't see it. I mean, I don't understand that dance. It should be more expressive. 5/10.
Average: 5.8/10 (6)
I was wondering if axman13 reviews this movie:
"I really don't want to say this... But I have to now.
This movie is so tasteless!! I mean, this movie have only moving text. That's IT! How is this a great animation anyway? You can't understand what it says on the screen! What if I didn't want to see this movie? What about CHARACTERS?? All you can see is RED & WHITE? There is no way you can't see text at the end! This animation is CRAP! It's not even something at all! I mean look at it! In what way is this supossed to be a movie if you can't see any character and stuff? All you hear is an orchesta, AND TEXT, the entire time! Explain to me, EXPLAIN TO ME!!
All the reviews are total jokes! Is it supposed to be only text? I don't even know how this damn movie got the review crew pick, or a rating of 4.69!
People think this review is worthless.
GO AHEAD! SAY IT! I DON'T CARE! IM JUST TRYING TO MAKE A POINT HERE!
BLAM THIS PIECE OF CRAP!
P.S the only reason I'm giving this a 1 is beacuase the music was pretty good. But that's it!"
But I'm agree with YueYang.
...Is this iven goying tu worq??
Well, I'll try to be the most honest as possible.
Personally, I love the storyboard: You explain why Mario keeps trying and trying... but I don't like the physics of the animation, this is, the sprites, backgrounds, etc.
Some of the sprites are quite "ragged", but they are really small details and they're difficult to see. Other things are the usage of them: You use the original Luigi and other times you use a Mario with Luigi colours, and it piss me a bit.
About backgrounds: I like them, except for one, the cave background floor it's distorted for my taste.
Oh, and also I don't like how some animations are made.
But anyways, the best for me of this flash is how you worked on it.
I guess that you've tried to make this the best as you could. That's one of the things I like.
Hey, it's so good!
It's lovely. I'm impressed. It's not perfect... but it's very close to be it!!
On all the world, I know only two people who do this type of series: Randy Solem and you. But, in the future, maybe someone will be included...
Hey, I wanna show you my new series, but it's under construction. But I'll send you it when the frist chapter it's done!
Oh, for all the people who are waiting for the next episode: I know how much time requires making the base, animating, etcetera of a series like this, so, don't be very impatient, you should not flood him!
Lo único que creo que te falta es lo del menú. Lo haces genial...
Mejoras un montón, chaval ;)
Y si no te importa... ¿podrías darme el link de descarga del sonido que aparece en ¿Un baño? cuando aparece Bowser?
uy man! tiene años que ya no tengo esos efectos de sonido.
pero muchos de ellos los encontre en findsounds.com buscandolo como laugh o laughs, los pedos pues...farts....cualquier cosa ponlo en english para que te salgan.
Un poco de violencia
Sólo puedo decir que la violencia no es buena, Dan...
En fin, algunas cosas están bien, pero la próxima vez trata de poner un menú para elegir la escena que quiera alguien... Y no ando con críticas, es que así queda mucho mejor.
En fin, sigue así. Espero que sigas con esa gran gracia que tienes.
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